Break things up into concise points and, where necessary, insert subheads — as there are in this article.

将事情分解成要点，并在必要时插入小标题——就像文中那样。

Stream of consciousness writing rarely reads well and you generally don't have the option to break up everything into short segments with subheads.

意识流写读起来好， 而且您通常无法选择将所有内容分解成带有小标题短片段。