When I read Lovecraft, my prose became luxurious and Byzantine.

我读拉夫特的时候，我的行文风格也变得华丽繁复，有拜占庭之风。

Ms Clark takes her time with this long, undulating novel.

这本情节跌宕起伏的长篇小说中，拉夫人的行文风格有点慢条斯理。

At times the book seems slightly sentimental.

书中，有些地方的行文会略显情绪化。

A series of grammatically proper sentences can stiffen that line, make it less pliable.

一连串中规中矩的句子会让行文呆板，不那么灵活。

The right word choice depends on the kind of writing you are doing.

词汇的恰当选择取决于你的行文种类。

Its brevity and telegraphic style vary the pace and keep the writing fresh.

这句话像电报电文一般简短的语言风格改变了整篇的节奏，使行文清新。

So far from variation or quick change?

行文沉闷呆板，千篇一律？

One type includes texts where fluency is less important.

一类包括对行文流畅性要求不那么高的文本。

Such phrasing stands out and suggests the strength of Mr Toibin's writing style.

这样的措辞出类拔萃，也显示了托宾行文的强有力。

For question one, the Integrated Writing question, raters are looking for three main things—accurate development, organization and language use.

第1题综合写作题中，评分员寻找三个要点：准确的行文结构、组织和语言使用。

He's done a lot of over-under stuff, but that effort just then, that was more like just a steady consistency.

他做了很多起伏不定的事情，但刚才的行文更像是有一种稳定的一致性。

What matters most is to find the proper way.

【审题构思】本题要求围绕“自主创业的利弊”这一标题，写一篇不少于150词的文章。写作时，可以引入主题，说明现状。第二分点阐述自主创业的利与弊。第三简单概括全文，强调自己的观点即可。【行文点评】（1）文章指出现象，随着科技的发展，以及工作压力增大，许多人选择自主创业。自主创业有利有弊。（2）文章第二主要论述了自主创业的利和弊。一方面，自主创业可以自由选择工作时间和场所，可以充分发挥自己的才智，也会全身心投入挣钱。另一方面，自主创业风险很高，而且没有同伴分担工作负担。（3）最后总结全文，再次表明观点，根据自身情况做出合适的选择。共享题干题。

When the medical director became aware of Mary's heroic act he immediately reviewed her file and called her into his office.

当他们的主治医生知道了玛丽救人的行文后，他立即重新查阅了玛丽的病历档案，并让她来办公室谈谈。

(3)It is indisputable that winning plays an essential role in our life, but we should also learn from failure.

【审题构思】本题要求围绕“如何现代生活中过上简单的生活”这一标题，写一篇不少于150词的文章。写作时，可以引入主题，说明现状。第二列举几个从简生活的例子并说明理由。第三简单概括全文，强调自己的观点即可。【行文点评】（1）文章指出现象，说明许多人重视成功。接着引出个人观点，是否成为胜者并不重要。（2）文章第二阐述理由，主要从两方面入手：先，关于成功和失败的定义因人而异，重要的不是结果，而是努力的过程；其次，成功不能被视为衡量一个人的唯一标准，还需要考虑其他因素。（3）最后总结全文，再次表明观点，虽然成功很重要，但是也要从失败中学习。共享题干题。

My self-centeredness had me writing my own five-star Amazon reviews for my various books, praising my elegant prose and rugged good looks.

我的自我中心使我为自己写的书亚马逊网站留下五星好评，赞美我的优美行文和豪放文风。

You would have to like ship the function by zipping the entire thing and having an executable so that all the dependencies live with it.

你不得不通过压缩整个项目并生成一个可执行文件来打包函数，以便所有依赖项都能与之共存。

First, accurate development: The raters are looking for how well you're able to select important information from the lecture, then clearly present it in relation to the relevant information from the reading.

第一点，准确的行文结构：评分员们将会考查你有没有很好地从演讲中选取的重要信息，然后清晰地将它和阅读文章中与之相关的相关信息陈述出来。