Break things up into concise points and, where necessary, insert subheads — as there are in this article.

情分解成简明的要点，并在必要时插入小标题——就像本中那样。

Only the subhead remains of the twenty-page sketch " The Cape Colony" (" Kapskaia koloniia" ).

只下 20 页的素描“开普殖民地”（“Kapskaia koloniia”）的副标题。

Stream of consciousness writing rarely reads well and you generally don't have the option to break up everything into short segments with subheads.

意识流写作很少很好， 而且您通常无法选择所有内容分解成带有小标题的短片段。