Hermione, let me read your composition, said Ron desperately, checking his watch.

赫敏，让我看看你的吧。罗恩看了看手表，心急火燎地说。

There are several conspicuous errors in your composition.

你的有几个明显的错误。

Some students marred their writings by a diversion into irrelevant material.

一些学生由于插入无关材料偏离主题而把写糟了。

He has deserved it by his composition, his arithmetic, everything.

、算术，一切都好。

You can't just go to anybody, even if they're a native English speaker, and say " hey, what do you think of this writing? "

你不能只是个人，即是英语为母语的人，然后跟他说：“你觉得我这篇写得怎么样？”

And you'll see that the writing the words have increased.

而且你会发现字数要求增加了。

In 1962, he won an essay competition.

1962年，他在一比赛中获胜。

You're going to have an essay that asks for an opinion, you're going to have an essay that does not ask for an opinion, and then you're going to have a hybrid, you're going to have a combination of the two.

我们会写到观点题型的，或者非观点题型的，或者写一些混合观点，你的里需要有两种主题的混合。

It'll make a great college essay one day.

就当是积累素材了。

And while you're talking with them, also ask for feedback – especially if your exam contained short-answer or essay questions where there's no concrete answer.

当你和他们交流的时候，也要征求一下他们的反馈——特别是当你的考试包含了简答题或者题这样没有具体答案的问题的时候。

The single-sentence paragraph more closely resembles talk than writing, and that's good.

这个一句话段落看起来更像是谈话而不是，这样就很好。

Jump to band 7 or it's free.

我们有批改服务和着名的在线课程。

In today's video, my annual TOEFL essay templates freshly updated for 2023.

在今天的视频中，我的年度托福模板将更新为 2023 年版本。

I was writing my phrases, when some customers came in.

正想，客人来了。

Gen Eds tend to cover core academic areas, like composition, social science, or math.

Gen Ed 课程往往涵盖核心学术领域，如、社会科学或数学。

It's the application. It's a whole big essay question, too. I've already done the essay.

你的申请。要写一篇很长的。- 我已经完成了。

Okay, that is a very quick look at a TOEFL independent essay.

好，迅速看了一篇托福独立。

Look, a lot of kids have good essays.

很多同学的都写得很好。

It seems that I can never write a good composition.

好像我总是写不出一篇好的来。

Yes, I think so, cause as a foreigner my English grammar is not perfect and I got a lot of corrections from American or Western teachers that I now can write a pretty good English essay.

我认为应该，因为我是外国人，我的英语语法并不是很好，美国老师或来自西方国家的老师纠正了我的很多错误，所以我现在才能写出优秀的英语。