So far from variation or quick change?

文沉闷呆板，千篇一律？

At times the book seems slightly sentimental.

书中，有些地方文会略显情绪化。

The right word choice depends on the kind of writing you are doing.

词汇恰当选择取决于文种类。

A series of grammatically proper sentences can stiffen that line, make it less pliable.

一连串中规中矩句子会让文呆板，不那么灵活。

When I read Lovecraft, my prose became luxurious and Byzantine.

我读洛弗克拉夫特时候，我文风格变得华丽繁复，有拜占庭之风。

Ms Clark takes her time with this long, undulating novel.

在本情节跌宕起伏长篇小说中，克拉克夫人文风格有点慢条斯理。

Such phrasing stands out and suggests the strength of Mr Toibin's writing style.

措辞出类拔萃，显示了托宾文强有力。

Its brevity and telegraphic style vary the pace and keep the writing fresh.

句话像电报电文一般简短语言风格改变了整篇节奏，使文清新。

For question one, the Integrated Writing question, raters are looking for three main things—accurate development, organization and language use.

在第1题综合写作题中，评分员寻找三个要点：准确文结构、组织和语言使用。

When the medical director became aware of Mary's heroic act he immediately reviewed her file and called her into his office.

当他们主治医生知道了玛丽救人文后，他立即重新查阅了玛丽病历档案，并让她来办公室谈谈。

My self-centeredness had me writing my own five-star Amazon reviews for my various books, praising my elegant prose and rugged good looks.

我自我中心使我为自己写书在亚马逊网站留下五星好评，赞美我优美文和豪放文风。

First, accurate development: The raters are looking for how well you're able to select important information from the lecture, then clearly present it in relation to the relevant information from the reading.

第一点，准确文结构：评分员们将会考查有没有很好地从演讲中选取重要信息，然后清晰地将它和阅读文章中与之相关相关信息陈述出来。