Better how you lied outs podcasting and we can get even better than I think. But I guess all of us need areas where we need to improve areas. We need to work on. And what are they, what are these things? We need to learn and why would an examiner?

Give us a bad sound. Leave that professional such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others.

Believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. I yes, it's one of those classic ones, doesn't it? It's your possible. Classic four paragraph. Answer a band seven when we start looking into details. Well in terms of grammar grammar range and accuracy. It does say that you can make a few mistakes, a few hours but have a very good mix. I'm talking here. Of course about the band seven descriptors that you can get online very easily, a good, mix of complex, and simple sentences. And many of the sentences will have no errors at all.

It will be completely error free together with a relatively wide range of vocabulary for a band seven, there will be some examples of poor word choices, you're choosing the wrong words, and maybe even the very occasional spelling mistake. Okay, what about cohesion and coherence a band seven will say yeah? Pretty good. Pretty good. Although, there may be some over or under use of cohesive devices either, you know, within the sentence or between sentences.

If you remember, if you listened into the band, nine talk that Ben and I were saying, well with that band, nine essay, you didn't even know notice so much that the use of those linking words they were in one, any sentence? No, we don't need to. There's a time in a place for them. So that's what band seven says. Don't overuse or underuse if you do. You're heading for a band.

Several. Well on the whole the response to the task for about seven is more than adequate.

Although there may be a tendency, it says to over generalize and to provide examples and supporting points that maybe you're not so convincing, they may be, you know, they may lack what they call.

Precise.

Focus words, of course. I mean what does this mean in practice? What what we're going to do today is have a look at a band, 7 essay each paragraph and look at the good points, the strong points and maybe even think of the weaknesses and how we might be able to improve on them, remembering that, of course. What do we do with these model essays? If you're looking to push your band score up, check out a band score which is higher than your level at the moment or round about the same level as you. What are you doing? That is right. What are you doing that? Maybe prevents you from getting that higher band score learning from and studying these model, essays is a great help. So let's look at paragraph one paragraph one. Here we go.

Paragraph one, the introduction to the whole thing.